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Specific Enough To Be Checked, Modest Enough To Be True

Say what you did in detail; say what it means without inflating it.

Two failures sit at opposite ends. The first is vagueness: a post that describes an approach in terms so general that nobody could attempt it or evaluate it. I made the task more engaging is not a description. What was the task before, what did you change, how long did it take, what did the room actually do differently. Specificity is what makes writing checkable, and checkable writing is the only kind that helps anyone.

The second failure is overreach: taking one class over one term and turning it into a claim about how learning works. The move is tempting because it makes the post feel important, and it is exactly the thing that makes experienced readers stop trusting the writer. One group is one group. Context, timing, the particular mix of people and the fact that you were paying unusual attention because you were planning to write about it all bear on the result, and none of them generalise.

The reliable balance is high specificity in the description and low ambition in the conclusion. Describe precisely, conclude cautiously, and mark clearly where the observation ends and the speculation begins. Do not invent numbers to firm up an impression. If you did not measure it, say you did not measure it and describe what you noticed instead. Impressions honestly labelled are perfectly respectable; impressions dressed as findings are not.